How to Use This Template
Internal promotions leverage your existing knowledge of the company. Copy this template, replace all text in [square brackets], and highlight your institutional knowledge and contributions.
[Your Name]
[Current Department/Team]
[Internal Contact Number]
[Internal Email]
[Date]
[Hiring Manager's Name]
[Department]
[Company Name]
Dear [Hiring Manager's Name],
I am writing to formally express my interest in the [Job Title] position in [Department]. Having been with [Company Name] for [timeframe] in my current role as [Current Position], I have developed a deep understanding of our organisation's values, culture, and strategic goals, and I am excited about the opportunity to contribute at a higher level.
PROVEN TRACK RECORD AT [COMPANY NAME]:
During my time in [Current Department/Team], I have:
• [Major Achievement 1 - e.g., "Led the implementation of [project] that resulted in [measurable outcome - e.g., '30% efficiency improvement']"]
• [Major Achievement 2 - e.g., "Consistently exceeded performance targets, achieving [specific metrics]"]
• [Major Achievement 3 - e.g., "Mentored [number] junior team members, with [number] receiving promotions"]
• [Collaboration - e.g., "Successfully collaborated with [relevant departments] on [initiatives]"]
READINESS FOR INCREASED RESPONSIBILITY:
I believe I am well-prepared for the [Job Title] role because:
• Deep Organisational Knowledge: I understand [Company Name]'s processes, systems, and stakeholder relationships, enabling me to contribute immediately without a lengthy onboarding period.
• Cross-Functional Experience: Through my work on [specific projects], I have built strong relationships with colleagues in [relevant departments], which will be invaluable in this role.
• Demonstrated Leadership: I have already taken on responsibilities beyond my current role, including [examples of additional responsibilities or leadership initiatives].
• Alignment with Company Goals: I am fully committed to [Company Name]'s mission of [mission/values], and have demonstrated this through [specific example].
VISION FOR THE ROLE:
If appointed, my priorities would include:
• [Priority 1 - specific to the new role]
• [Priority 2 - showing understanding of department goals]
• [Priority 3 - leveraging organisational knowledge]
I am passionate about [Company Name]'s future and would be honoured to take on this expanded responsibility. I am confident that my proven performance, institutional knowledge, and commitment to our shared goals make me an ideal candidate for this position.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application with you in more detail. Thank you for considering my internal application.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Current Position]
Internal Promotion Tips
- Highlight achievements: Show concrete results you've delivered in current role
- Leverage institutional knowledge: Emphasise understanding of company culture and processes
- Show readiness: Demonstrate you're already performing at the next level
- Maintain professionalism: Even though internal, keep it formal
- Reference relationships: Mention cross-functional collaboration
- Show vision: Demonstrate understanding of the new role's priorities